![]() What if you could erase yourself from the world? What if you didn't have a choice in the matter? This is John Riven's story. I will be trickling out my book bit by bit in chunks of downloadable files in hopes that I can get feedback and I can give myself a swift kick in the keister to finish this damned story already! >_< First few chapters can be downloaded here for free: Chapters 1, 2, & 3 Chapters 4, 5, & 6 Chapters 7, 8, & 9 Chapter 10 Chapter 11 Chapter 12 Chapter 13 Chapter 14 As far as an overall description of the story, it will read like a graphic novel, or comic book to you laymen, but without the graphics. A graphic-less novel, if you will. LOL. The main character, our anti-hero John Riven, will gain the ability to erase himself from other peoples memories simply by touching them. For example, if John finds himself in a bit of a scuffle, he can throw a punch, touch the assailant's face with his bare knuckles, and erase all memories that deal with John. The mind will fill in any gaps. The person will then not know who John is, not pursue him, nor even know why his face is hurting. Got it? Good. ^_^ Also keep in mind that this is a very rough draft. Basic editing only. If you spot an error, feel free to fill me in on it. Now, enjoy, and as always, feedback would be appreciated! Happy reading and spread the word!!! -Zax |
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